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Daring Do has always been hunting treasures all her life, but nopony has ever asked the question: Why? Explore Daring's past and motivations and see how the fabled 'fearless explorer Daring Do' isn't so fearless after all.

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Author's Notes
The last part of my Remembrance series! (The other four fics are available on my profile) Longest fic yet and I'm very proud on how it turned out. As this is the 5th fic of the first collection of the Remembrance fics, I will be taken a short break and not release another Remembrance-based fanfic for a while.

Other than that, I hope you enjoy this story and do leave a comment stating what I can improve on/what I did well etc. I really do read every single comment I get and treasure each constructive criticism or praise I receive.

And for the first time ever, just using plain text was too big for Deviantart! As such, here's the huge PDF file :P

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Cover art done by the very talented Poppeto([link])

Proofreading done by JohnPerry ([link]), Bronymaster ([link]) and a few other people from the Singapore Brony Society. Thank you all for taking the time to read it.

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My account on FiMFiction: www.fimfiction.net/Deathscar

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~asluc96 Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Another good job :D
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~Sycharge Jul 18, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you :D
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~asluc96 Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome :D
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:iconmakri14:
You got the same logo as me! Lol Derp!
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~Sycharge Jul 14, 2012  Student Writer
Because its an awesome logo :D
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*StoryPony Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Amazing, my friend, pure amazement. You gave Daring such a fitting personality of adventure, suaveness, compassion, so many emotions that I envisioned in my mind. I wasnt reading a story, I was observing the dramatic life of an adventurer. This could actually be a short film if I do say so myself,but I gotta sat that I absolutely LOVE Raider and how he is with both Danger and his concern for Daring. But I think I found a typo:

"Raider led Danger through the streets of Manehattern, which was the nearest town from their most recent quest."
Didn't you mean Daring? And is that how you speel Manehattan?

Anywho, this was awesome, I read it all and was completely invested. Well done work here, Sycharge.
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~Sycharge Jul 14, 2012  Student Writer
Yeap! That was a typo! Thank you for spotting it! :) I'm glad you liked it! It was one I invested quite a bit of effort into! :D
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*StoryPony Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I could definitely tell, I actually couldnt believe myself when I found out that it was 40 pages, it felt like 2 pages due to how invested I was int it, maybe its cuz I am a fast reader XD~ It was awesome, bro ^^
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~Sycharge Jul 14, 2012  Student Writer
So happy you liked it :D
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*StoryPony Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Loved it dude, and not a prob
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